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Dear Business Results Seeker "One Company increased their orders from 164 to 427 using these copywriting secrets in a single mailing" Click here to get your copy now.. Wouldn't it be a wonderful feeling to send a sales letter out knowing it will result in over £24,101 worth of business? That’s what the increase of 263 orders described above brought in... Client Testimonial - David d'Orton-Gibson
David d'Orton-Gibson,
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These secret techniques can be used on adverts, websites, brochures and newsletters, as well as sales letters, to gain stunning results |
Create dramatic sales improvements by adopting the powerful ‘direct-response’ methods revealed in this book. They really do “steal customers from your competitors – and best of all they do it ethically! This book describes in straight forward, easy to understand language EXACTLY HOW to persuade people, ethically, to buy from you. It explains how you can make sure your letters, adverts, web pages, brochures, newsletters - actually any marketing in print - ‘brings home stunning results for you’. Without any doubt. Click here to get your copy |
The book; ‘I Want to Buy Your Product… Have You Sent Me a Letter Yet?’ contains 19 chapters of little known, but proven, secrets of how to create powerful sales letters that compel your prospects to respond. Discover how to turn your letter into that 'high-powered salesperson'. As I’ve already said, it’ll work constantly for you 24 hours a day, 7 days a week.
Adopt any, and preferably all, of these techniques in your writing and reap the hidden wealth of business that is waiting for you out there and which you fully deserve.
Here is your chance to boost your sales significantly; you can accumulate increased sales and gain a substantial growth of new customers by sending out your responsive letter time and time again, whenever you want to. It will continue to work effectively for you for many years.
Have no doubt, the secrets these pages hold for you are indispensable - they give you the exact insider knowledge you need to develop your own compelling letters to garner the fantastic results so many other businesses are already enjoying.
Check out the first and third chapters completely free and without obligation. (PDF Format)
Book Review - Sadhiv Mahandru
“I was getting 29 clicks per day. Then I changed my ad (on Google). This is getting close to 100 clicks per day! More than triple the number of people to my site! Just did what you said - provided a headline that would interrupt a person from their day and tried to hit their emotions – and the results are just amazing!”
Sadhiv Mahandru,
www.NaturalElements.co.uk
In a moment I'll tell you how you can get your own copy of this exceptional guide. A book giving you the professional advice you crave when writing your sales letters. More importantly, it does so in straightforward and easy to follow steps:
Book Review - Ann Cliff
“This is probably one of only 5 or 6 books I’ve ever seen in the world that explains vividly how to increase the response that your advertising, your sales letters, your newsletters, your website, your email communications, and your brochures result in by, what is seeming to be a minimum of around 20% to 25%, sometimes 200%, 400%, 500% , even 600% and often more.”
Ann Cliff, Business Editor
Sarceaux Publications, London
But first, let me tell you how what you'll find inside its priceless pages is going to accelerate your business results: (If you can’t wait – Click here to order your copy immediately)
- You’ll understand how important it is to know who your prospects are; be selective about who you write to or where you advertise to harvest the highest results possible for your marketing message.
A Management Letting Agent followed this advice. He had a very targeted and focused list of prospective landlords. It was targeted because these people were purchasing apartments at a very luxurious development. He wrote offering his management services. The result? An incredible 44.2% response. This would never have happened if his list hadn’t been so specific. The full letter is printed on pages 67-70 in the book
The 262% increase example I gave you at the beginning of this letter was for a mailing that went out to a targeted list of prospects, which meant that the letter was highly relevant to ALL the people who received it. (Read more about targeting in Chapter 5; Careful Targeting - Creates Awesome Results). -
The significant improvements you gain will be amazing, just follow the simple, but effective advice revealed in its pages. Changes in what you write and how you describe your offer to your prospects has an incredible impact on your results. Simple things like guiding your prospect through the steps you want him or her to take, like picking up the phone or sending an email or popping his or her details onto the request form and posting it. (Covered in Chapter 9; Make Your Offer Compelling).
"If You Don't Give A Very Clear Call To Action Then Very Little Action Will Be Taken And Your Sales Will Be Minimal Or Even Non-Existent"
- Make your letter and offer compelling. Your reader only wants to know what result he can expect and enjoy when he buys from you - he does not care about you or your business - only what you can do for him. What problem will you solve? How will you make life easier or more pleasurable for him? (See Chapter 7; Long Letters Don’t Work - Do They?).
- Find out how to get QUALIFIED PROSPECTS for your database so that you can create an on-going relationship that will culminate in their placing business with you.
Although there are 'mailing lists' that you can buy they are rarely qualified to your specific requirements. If you haven't got your own contact database you will discover how you can use the mailing list and get people to 'self-qualify' so that you can follow up with an exciting and relevant offer. (Also covered in Chapter 5; Careful Targeting - Creates Awesome Results). - Discover how having the right headline or opening sentence can impact on and increase your results by as much as 83% or more; use this book to make sure that you get the additional 83% more, that you richly deserve.
If you don't have the right opening to your letter it will never be read and it won't matter how good your offer is, because your prospect will never know. -
Amazingly using certain words in your headlines can boost the number of people who will take up your offer.
There are proven words that will grab your reader's attention and entice him or her to read your letter, you’ll discover 79 of these in Chapter 8 of the book; Your Headline Can Make or Break Your Results).
Using some of these words has, in some cases, boosted response by over 1200% - I know that seems incredible. But it does happen, time and time again.Isn't It Worth Taking Up This Offer
Just To Find Out How Much You
Can Boost Your Sales By?
Click here to get your copy now.. - Tell the full story - when you capture someone's attention and get him to imagine the benefits he will receive from your services or products he will want to know everything about it. Don't skimp on the detail.
Giving your reader all the 'gen' means that he will make an 'informed' decision and, when he does, he will be more inclined to buy from YOU, the person who was generous enough to give all that background without turning it into a full 'sales pitch'. -
Admit limitations. It makes your sales message more believable. Many sales people, and letters, skirt around the less attractive aspects of their product or service.
Of course, if you avoid disclosing any limitations, your offer can sound as if it is "too good to be true", even though what you are describing is genuine and your promises can be fulfilled.
When you let your reader into the 'trade secret' of some small thing that your product or service cannot do; when you are honest about any limitations that it may have, or areas in which it should not be used, he will feel more comfortable about trusting what you are saying. And he will be more inclined to accept your assurances about your offer.
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Use anecdotes about other satisfied and happy customers or clients. It brings your proposal alive for people. Quoted testimonials are immensely powerful. After all - if you are looking for a nice restaurant would you choose one from the Yellow Pages or one that is recommended by a trusted friend or family member?
Being able to tell your prospects about your delighted clients, and being able to quote them, is a strong marketing tool for your business. And there is a way that you can do this so that it is truly believable - find out how in Chapters 6 and 7 of this powerful book.
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You’ll realise why sending a letter out without a P.S. is almost criminal.
You are stealing from yourself when you leave off the P.S. Why? Because your strong, benefit laden, 'PS' can increase your readership by up to 67%.
Research has shown that the P.S. is the second part of a letter that is read - when it clearly shows the result your reader can expect from your offer it will encourage him or her to read the rest of the letter.
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Three easy to follow check lists…
- 27 Questions to Make Writing as Easy as Falling off a Log
- 20 Tips to Make Your Sales Letter Compelling
- 31 Points to Make Your Order Form Easy to Use - Not a Barrier to Buying
…help you to gather everything you need to create your perfect sales letter, hone it into the highest performing 'sales-person' you can send out to your prospects and develop the most responsive order form you can possibly create; whenever you want more orders. (All placed conveniently together in Chapter 19 – you can copy and use these, as often as you wish).
The 27 questions in the first checklist identifies your offer and everything you need to gather together to make it ‘come alive.’ Then use the 20 questions checklist as you review your sales letter to be certain you have created the most riveting read for your recipient – he just won’t be able to put your letter down - except to find the order form so he can get his hands on whatever you are offering.
An ill-designed response form can kill the sale. Create your form to encourage your prospective purchaser - use the 31 point checklist describe in Chapter 11 to get it right.
Let me give you some more insights to this marketing methodology:
![]() Business owners have already used these techniques to create thousands of pounds of additional sales |
Check the Contents for Yourself…This is the list of contents taken directly from the book. As you discover each new technique, you will find a workshop that will guide you through applying it to your own business. By the end of the book you will have your own superior letter and responsive order form – ready to go. Just look at what you’ll discover…. |
Chapter 1-Why Bother to Write to Your Prospects?
How This Book Will Help You to Increase Your Sales
Create Your Own Reference Points
Chapter 2-Who are You Writing to and Why?
Who are you writing to?
Do you already know this person?
Why are you writing?
What is your offer?
What is your guarantee?
Workshop: Define Your Audience and Offer
Chapter 3-Know What Your Customer is Worth
Your Highest Profit Will Usually Come from
Subsequent Sales…
Workshop: Calculate Your Customer’s Life Time Value
Chapter 4-Treat People as Individuals to Get Glorious Responses
3 Key Actions Your Sales Letter Must Achieve…
Use the Right Language to Cut Through
Communication Barriers
Tell Your Reader What They Want to Know
Workshop: Paint the Picture
Chapter 5-Careful Targeting - Creates Awesome Results
‘Preparing the Ground’
Target Your Audience and Make a Real Difference
How Do I Find My Target Audience?
How do I find people interested in my product or service
Workshop: Preparing Your Contact Database
Chapter 6- 8 Tips to Create High Performance Sales Letters…
Chapter 7-Long Letters Don’t Work - Do They?
The Key? Your Letter Must be Plausible…
Make your letters compelling for all types of people
Expand the Storyline…
Supply All the Facts and Figures – Good and Bad
Writing ‘As You Speak’
Use Stories in Your Letter…
How to Make Your Letter Easy to Read…
Workshop: Gather Your Material
Chapter 8-Your Headline Can Make or Break Your Results
The Last Headline Often Proves To Be The Winner…
Get the Appeal Right and Your Reader will Respond…
Use These Words in Your Headline to Substantially
Increase Readership…
‘Attention’ words & phrases to draw your readers in…
Examples of headlines using ‘attention’ words
When You Are Specific…You are Believable
Size Matters…
Gather Ideas and Examples to Inspire Your Writing…
Combine Headlines to Give a Powerful Result…
Workshop: Create Winning Headlines for Your Product or Service Now
Chapter 9-Make Your Offer Compelling
Grab Attention, Create Interest and Desire: These Lead
to Action and Will Harvest an Excellent Response
Tell Your Reader What To Do Next…
A Guarantee Makes it Easy for Your Prospect to Buy…
Increase the Business You will Attract - Tell Your
Prospect about Your Guarantee ‘Up Front’
The ‘puppy-dog’ appeal
Workshop: Decide Your Risk Reversal
Chapter 10-Outline of a Successful Letter
Benefits and Results Sell – Not Features
Use These 13 Techniques to Make Your Letter Attractive
Plain is Best…
Link Your Paragraphs to Create a ‘Flow’
Keep It Personal… Sign Your Letter Personally
How to create your own signature image…
Workshop: Draft Your First Letter
Chapter 11-Design a Responsive Order Form
Avoid Simple, But Expensive Mistakes…
A Form That Is Difficult To Complete Will Be Abandoned
These 31 Tips Will Make Your Order Form Easy to Use…
Workshop: Design Your Responsive Response Form
Chapter 12-Your Mailout Package
How do You Read Your Letters?
How the Package is Collated can Decimate or Raise
Your Readership
Welcome to the ‘Peek’ Party
Mailing Houses Can Save Time but…
Send Yourself a Letter…
Chapter 13-How to Guarantee Your Results
Test Everything - Especially Your Headline
Which of these Headlines Work for You?
Monitor Your Responses
These Headlines Out-Performed The Others:
Workshop: Get Control of Your Responses
Chapter 14-Advertise to Create Business Wealth
How To Make Your Adverts Sell
Newsflash: People don’t buy Newspapers or
Magazines just to Read the Adverts!
This Single Technique Will Make Your Advert
Out-Perform Your Competitors
Include These 9 Elements to Make Your Advert
Perform
AIDA Gets it Right…
“A Picture Paints a Thousand Words – or does it?”
Use Your Advertising to Create Other Successes
Chapter 15-Weave Your Web Page to Capture Your Prospect
Direct Response Web Site Gathers Impressive
Results
Reassure Your Visitor Constantly
Discover Your Target Market Through Your Website
Chapter 16-Enhance Your Company Image with Newsletters
9 Mistakes People Make in Newsletters
Electronic Newsletters can be Cost Effective
Chapter 17-How to Write Brochures and Catalogues
Mistakes Most Company Brochures Make
Chapter 18-Preparing to Write
Have Everything to Hand to Make Writing Easier…
Create the Right Environment to Write
Handling Writer's Block
How to ‘kick-start’ your writing
Relax into a writing mood
Energise your writing creativity
Use others to inspire you
Chapter 19 - Practical Checklists - Copy and Use:
Checklist: 27 Questions to Prepare You for Writing
Checklist: 20 Tips to Check Your Sales Letter Against
Checklist: 31 Points for Your Order Form Design
This is what other people have said about the book and my techniques…
Book Review - Brian James
“I know Carol’s writing methods work because I have tried several and they have had a dramatic impact on improved response rates. One letter produced a 19% response within 48 hours. Carol’s book may change your life.
Brian James
Chairman
The Brian James Group
Book Review - Janet Browne
“It is so clear and methodical. I’ve learnt the theory (of copywriting) from others, but now your book puts it into a logical and ‘followable’ order, with lots of practical added tips and details. I shall be referring to it often. With the easily identifiable sections, practical examples and step-by-step workshops to guide the reader through each phase, it is a very useful desktop handbook to ‘perfect’ my marketing letters.”
Janet Browne,
Managing Director
BLH High-Care
Book Review - Paul Gorman
"I have quickly grown to admire Carol's skill as a business copywriter. She is ONE copywriter I would be happy to suggest many, many business owners and professionals employ to write advertising, sales letter, brochure and web site copy for their products, services or treatments.”
Paul Gorman
£3,000/hour Business Strategist
Client Testimonial - Martin Moore
“It has been invaluable to have an expert writing targeted marketing material that has achieved such fantastic results – 44.2% response to a small mailing is amazing”
Martin Moore,
Martin & Co, Poole
Book Review - Steve Bower
“Your advice is much more broadly applicable than just letters, and the workshops/ 'take-aways' are REALLY good.”
Steve Bower
Seven Communications Ltd
Book Review - Edward Rivis
“When I read the incredible insights in Carol's book ... I was, to be honest, quite shocked by what I learnt. My letters were actually NOT based on the correct principles of explaining the Benefits of the Services I provide my clients.
I wasn't a long way off - but Carol's book really uncovered what I should be saying. I am now rewriting all of my existing materials.... and I know the increased response will make that exercise worthwhile.”
Edward Rivis
Managing Director
Sumatrix Ltd
Book Review - Deonne Connelly
“A refreshing read that remains engaging to the last page. I was impressed with the multitude of examples and the regular use of questions and targets throughout, all gearing you to remain focused. Altogether a highly informative book aimed at all learning styles and all levels of sales marketing whether you’re a novice starting out on your first mail shot or you just need some tips on refining your style.”
Deonne Connelly
BLH High-Care
Book Review - Azi Azhakesan
“At first I thought your book would be a daunting read but I was wrong! I found your book to be very informative and shows me that I CAN and SHOULD write my own copy for my business.
Your style of writing is easy going, informative and uncomplicated which gives me more confidence as I have the understanding to write my own copy now, perhaps a copywriting course as a next step?”
Azi Azhakesan
Halcyon Days
Book Review - Pam Graham
Carol Bentley’s book is what I call ‘delve-able’. It’s individuality allows you to delve into a Chapter to seek inspiration or just check something out.
Pam Graham
Everlasting Books
Book Review - Anthony van Dort
“…long letters do sell providing they are interesting and provide a compelling offer - all covered in page 65, chapter 9. I would recommend this book all day long. It is fun, interesting and EXTREMELY profitable!”
Anthony van Dort
Managing Director
Liberty Leisure
"OK, OK - I can see there's some really
powerful and important advice
in your book" I can hear you saying,
"now, How do I get hold of a copy
and what does it cost?"
With so much valuable information and such important techniques that could explode your business into its highest ever turnover, you could be forgiven for thinking that this is going to cost you a small fortune.
It’s worth a small fortune – if you got £24,000 worth of business or, better still, £99,500 in more business by using these techniques in a single letter or advert, wouldn’t you be deliriously happy to invest £700 or £800? I bet you would. There’s nowhere in the world you could get a return of 3428.5% like this on an investment! But I haven’t written this book to make a fortune – I use the techniques it contains to do that! This book is yours for an incredibly low £14.97 with FREE P&P to UK addresses. (For P+P for other destinations Click here: ) It really is just a click of your mouse away. The order link below will take you to a 128-bit encrypted secure PayPal payment site, where you can use your debit or credit card without opening a PayPal account. If you have a reference code (received either in a letter or advert) please enter it here, if not leave the box blank. Now click the 'Buy Now' button to get your book.
But wait, I have an even better offer for you... Want it Instantly?There’s nothing worse than waiting for a book to arrive when you are eager to get your hands on its juicy and exciting contents, is there? Especially when you know the techniques it reveals will have such a massive impact on your sales results. So here’s what I’ve decided to do... Order your copy of the book now and I’ll get it off to you within 5 working days, but as a special bonus, as soon as your payment is processed, I will send you a download link, via email, to an electronic (PDF) version of the complete book so you can start using these powerful techniques immediately. When the actual book arrives you’ll be able to read it away from your computer screen, and highlight important gems. And you’ll still have the electronic version to search through whenever you want to check something when you are at your computer. It will be like having me sitting at your side advising you as you craft your own high-performing sales letter or advert. The techniques I describe in my book have been proven, time and time again, to gain a distinct advantage for anyone who uses them. In 1905 the copywriter, John E Kennedy told Albert I Thomas “Advertising is ‘Salesmanship in Print”And that applies to any sort of ‘advertising’ in print, whether it is adverts in newspapers and magazines or the sales letter you send out. And Joseph Conrad, an English novelist, said: " My task, which I am trying to achieve is, And that is what you want to do with your prospects so he or she is moved to take up your offer. As happened in this instance: I was asked to write a letter to send out about the launch of The Barclays Business Club in Dorset (UK) which was being hosted by Barclays Bank plc The letter was sent out to a precisely targeted list of business people, people who had demonstrated that they were interested in business networking. What happened? 38% Of The People We
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